I’m standing on edge
at the climatic scene
that involves us both
at heart-felt intensity.
Refreshing waves they
wash over me my being
and honestly my love I
wonder if I’m breathing.
Suffocating anticipation
has me gasping breath
that surges through me
and it scares me to death.
I’ve examined myself I
try to keep myself sane.
Feelings I feel for you
know nothing the same.
Nothing envelopes to
open my heart so wide
where nothing is left
for me to securely hide.
I try and describe what
warmth it springs forth
making my movements
stear more off my course.
My pulse rages and I cry
at the growing state of
my level of elevation in
what once I thought love.
To be honest I am scared
but I will let these things
play as they do in tandem
from intensity to dreams.
Am I going mad am I now
some kind of hallucination
that never happens ever in
nature or my imagination?
You are everything in a
pill I swallow hollow down
that has me begging for
your every breath of sound.
I am invincable with this
feeling that strength brings.
From evolving past the past
of mine to become new to me.
Poignant and powerful, beautifully penned, I especially enjoyed the analogy of waves washing you over!
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Thank you for that Tanya.
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My pleasure Jared! Fine work!
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I know you say that you’re not a poet, but I’m here to tell you that this is one of the best poems I’ve ever read. I don’t just say that to make you feel good or because I consider you a friend. It’s true & I can tell you speak from your heart & I can feel it. Your words move me, especially this line:
“Refreshing waves they
wash over me my being
and honestly my love I
wonder if I’m breathing.
Awesome work, Winchester! 💕
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Awe. You’re too kind Kristian. Your words mean a lot and I’m glad you enjoy what I write. I truly am honored you hold what I write in high esteem. That gives me confidence I have no words for. Youre a wonderful writer too. I appreciate you Weigman. 😊
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Thank you, Jared. I appreciate you too.
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I loved this … really amazing 😊
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Thank you 😊
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