Untangle Me

Dissected a thousand parts

that are held together they

stay to hold sway over me

for you what I am I debate.

May I be critiqued so that

I may be a better part of me

that is not flailing around

as if a ship so tossed by seas.

I am a problem you do solve

I don’t know so I’m conflicted.

Here my hands are steady I

am to you so much addicted.

Images tell a thousand words

so look at me from an angle.

Tear a part then put together

so me my tenets will untangle.

What protrudes retracts in

harmony that is conducted

by a hand that’s not my own;

I’ll be what you’ve constructed.

Your perception is my god.

So deliver me so I will know

that for now here in today I

will have some direction to go.

3 Comments Add yours

  1. kristianw84 says:

    Beautiful & heartfelt, Jared! 💕

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you…Kristian. 😁 It’s the only place I write from. My brain just tries, miserably, to maintain grammar. Lol.


      1. kristianw84 says:

        Lol. I understand!! 😂

        Liked by 1 person

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