Our Little Creations

I made a universe today

from broken parts in the

palm of my hand the sand

I lifted to lips I do breathe.

Shall I be as a master of

portals I will flow down?

I can think of no nicer gift

a creator gave to be found.

I am a spark in the dark

where there’s not a light

except for precepts spun

from my lips for tonight.

I wonder what I can spin

in the corner of my hand

that makes sense to me

that one can understand?

I would create no pain.

I’ll create what I’ve forgot.

There’d be things to me

for others I’ve not thought.

Amazed I am awestruck

by creations surrounding

me I will think of things I

want to be so resounding.

Would it be pain or tumult;

chaos or despair not at all.

I’d raise mountains where

no person would ever fall.

Lord see what’s been done

in this realm you call yours.

I see the answer now I know

the notion for me it unfurls.

So give me rapture my Lord

I’ll swing a sword through.

I’ll create my own translation;

things I could understand too.

An outcast’s revenge defiles;

bind to drain does his poverty.

We’re here to create Lord I feel

your lonely gifts inside of me.

11 Comments Add yours

  1. sbailey says:

    Wow Jared! I love this you did so well!:)

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    1. Thank you Stella😊

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      1. sbailey says:

        You’re welcome! Maybe be one of my favorite of yours! 🙂

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  2. kristianw84 says:

    Jared!!!! This is AMAZING!! I was transfixed by every single word. Awesome choice of gif too. 😊

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    1. Awww. Thank you Weigman!!

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      1. kristianw84 says:

        You’re so welcome! Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift. You’re a lyrical poet.

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  3. aflawedpearl says:


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      1. aflawedpearl says:

        You’re most welcome, Jared

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  4. Yes indeed, Jared … lonely gifts.

    I find I must wait till I have the uninterrupted
    time to partake of your prolific poetic site.
    No quick dive in & out of a fish bowl 😎

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    1. You know David, that is quite the compliment and I really appreciate it.

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