Until Night Cries

My tears saw you

as they rolled slow

down my cheek I

felt gently as snow.

***

That touched me

in a bitter minute

was an emotion I

now sit here in it.

***

Have you your lip

ready a word wept

for the secrets of

a love we have kept?

***

No story of a want

yet but a victor hyhm

where together we

no longer cry again.

***

A lane where we do

dance laughingly cry

when the night cries

for us to say goodbye.

***

Together we are song

and our bliss a chorus.

Time it seems shall it

now never ignore us.

14 Comments Add yours

  1. ‘That touched me in a bitter moment.’ Amazing line.

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    1. Thank you very much.

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      1. You’re welcome. I could see an entire short story based on that line alone. Well done sir.

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  2. kristianw84 says:

    Beautiful! ๐Ÿ˜

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    1. Thank you!! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. kristianw84 says:

        You’re welcome, my friend! ๐Ÿค—

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  3. iScriblr says:

    Brilliant!โค๏ธ

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    1. Thank you!! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  4. Stella says:

    So very beautiful! Sweet love!:)

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    1. Thank you my dear Stella. ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      1. Stella says:

        :):)๐Ÿ’•

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  5. theusedlife says:

    This is very beautiful and artfully done.

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    1. Thank you my friend! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. theusedlife says:

        Always welcome! ๐Ÿ™‚

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