Perspective, Poetry

The Superior Sex

Posted by Jared on

Existed we did in Eden,
gardens they did bring,
with a glow that controls,
what all hearts still sing.
In a moment outside time
we once were deceived
by a serpent who existed
in a god’s created leaves.
Destined to die we both are
but still some see you as less.
But to bring into the world a
child is like a god’s caress.
From you exquisite ladies
are mystifying realms
that can sink mighty ships
or be the wind in their sails.

Published by Jared

A little something from me.

5 Comments Add yours

  1. SRIKANTH says:
    October 14, 2020 at 11:33 pm

    Wonderful poem! Well portrayed 👍🤝

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    1. JW says:
      October 14, 2020 at 11:38 pm

      Thank you Srikanth!!

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  2. glitzyritzymommy says:
    October 16, 2020 at 3:15 pm

    Beautiful 😍

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    1. JW says:
      October 16, 2020 at 3:48 pm

      Its true. Women are far superior than men.

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  3. glitzyritzymommy says:
    October 16, 2020 at 3:55 pm

    I think we are equal sweetheart.. we just take a little more in some aspects but with that said your a terrific man and refreshing as a writer and a person!! I love your writing and admire your insight and admire you!! Your honesty and sincerity shine 💖

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