My Disorder

All that I was hoping for
I have achieved in order
from a drum beat’s cadence
comes my own disorder.

Nonchalant to exquisite
rich tones and laughter
you follow every word I
expel to my own disaster. 

Down all the way down I
desire from a child grown
some moments to be civil
not with conflicted tone.

The music within me it
had died and all had gone.
A rhythmic drum ensnares
me I will repair all wrong.

What is in my proximity
so close there is no calm?
Have a beat in your heart
strike so I learn your song.

Mine had been metallic it
dredged dug under sound
that beats unholy overtures
repeating, ‘my hell is found.’

Selfish I am keeping beat
of remarkable remarks so
give unto me gifts of beauty
so my disorder slows.

Purified by your love,
purified by our heat,
I am captured so my head
calls for an allegiant beat.

A drum is subconscious
it beats just as so does heart.
Let us create beautiful art
to expose our insecure parts.

Vacant is a desire for fame
I listen to my mind over
and over again my friend
luck is not found in clover.

We make ourselves healthy
so amongst us we can fight.
So damn to reality friend let’s
make our own one tonight.


My friends I’m calling it an early night. Thank you to my friends and all who may be dropping by. A lot of you I connect with are outside WordPress.

I think it’s awesome and constructive towards the healing power of unity and self expression to sit back read some poetry and listen to some good music. Now there are so many fun songs I enjoy more than others that I don’t know where to begin.

So I want to be fun and share the fun tonight. This is Led Zeppelin and what I consider to be one of the greatest drum sets I’ve ever heard.

So for random fun I hope you enjoy what I’ve been listening to now for the past three hours straight. For some who may not like it I apologize for torturing you.

Peace and Love Friends,


5 Comments Add yours

  1. Susi Bocks says:

    Self-care is important! Do what you need to do, Jared. And BTW, Led Zeppelin is awesome! 😉

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Jared says:

      Rock on Susi. 🤘

      Liked by 1 person

  2. kristianw84 says:

    John Bonham was the man!! Seriously one of the greatest drummers ever. In some songs he even played in a different time than the rest of his band mates, which says a lot for the band as a whole!! Okay, I’m totally nerding out now, so I’m gonna go listen to some Zeppelin!

    Oh, and gorgeous poetry, as always! Have a wonderful night, my friend.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Jared says:

      Yes Ma’am I love Zeppelin and I appreciate that Kristian. You’re awesome too.

      Liked by 1 person

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